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You were taking a trip to Italy for a vacation. The most beautiful place to you though you know many other places are like that. When you got from the plane a crowd of guys surrounded you telling you how pretty you are. You never got that at your home. You couldn't even get a date. So you took a trip to Italy to rest your mind for christmas before school started again. You walked down the paved room. All you heard was music and people being cheerful. You felt happy like you could do anything now. You got a hotel and headed out to see what Italy was like.

You went to a restaurant and when you were eating you saw a boy running. "AHHHHHHH!!!! IT'S ARTHUR!!! LUDWIG HELP!!!!" he hid under your table. You blushed and jolted a little from that. You looked under the table and saw him shaking. "Are you okay?" you asked wondering if he was okay. He saw you "Wow! Your prettier than the girls I've seen you must be an angel sent from heaven!" that made you blush tomato red. "I'm sorry for hiding." he smiled and got up. "I'm Feliciano Vargas! Though can call me Feliciano." He laughed. You smiled at that because you never had this much fun at (Where you live) ((unless you live in Italy XD)).

Feliciano took your hand and started to take you on a tour. "How do you know I'm new?" he laughed. "Because Bella, your accent is different." you looked at him. -My name is not Bella.- you thought. "Ummm, I'm ________ not Bella." you said. Feliciano looked at you "That means beautiful in Italy." he smiled. He took you to the Rome coliseum and you met his older brother Lovino. He wasn't that pleasant to met. He then took you to Venice and was rowing you down the strip in a gondola. Then he started to tell you a story about when he was young. "Hey, ________?" you looked at him, "Yes?" you answered. "Can I tell you a story?" you nodded and he started.

Feliciano took a deep breathe "When I was a little bambino. My Grandpa took care of me. Though I was interactive with other countries until he took me away. I learn many things from him he was a great teacher. Though when he left and return back home everyone was different. I guess we don't stay the same. This boy name Holy Rome try to become an alliance with me though I didn't because I didn't want him to become my grandpa. Now I wonder where he is now." he started to tear up.

You almost cried because of the story. You saw him tearing up. "Don't worry. He'll come back." Feliciano smiled. "Though he looks just like Ludwig." he laughed. You smiled and you got to a dock. "Hey would you like to come over for dinner at my place?" you blinked, "Sure." you answered blankly.

~~At his house~~

You walked to a cottage looking house and you looked at the address. -This is the address. Heh, his house is so cute.- you giggled. You walked up and knocked on the door. The door flung out and Feliciano was right there with a warm smile on his face. "Ciao~ I'm glad you came __________." he let you in. "Oh that's Ludwig." he pointed to the german that was drinking beer. He had slicked back blonde hair and blue eyes. He had a grim looked that scared you though he wore a green military clothes. You remember he said he looked just like him.

"Feliciano do you think Ludwig is actually is Holy Roman Empire?" Feliciano was in shocked. "I don't know but I don't want to asked either." you nodded knowing what he's saying.  "Oh, bella why don't you move here?" you were in shock "B-but I can't." Feliciano slipped a ring onto your finger.

"Now you can." Feliciano smiled.

You hugged him.
Sorry this was late
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:iconangelnotes:
AngelNotes Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2015  New member Student Artist
Si si si si!!!!!! 😄
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imjustpassingthrough Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2015
I literally squeaked with happiness! ..Seriously, the looks I got.
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hetaliafangirl01 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Me and my friends once talked about how funny and awsome it would b if Germnay was hre but i believe hre died during the war when he left
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NOMNOMSUN Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014
Story seems rushed and has a lot of Grammar errors. Though, practice does make perfect, or if this is one of your earlier stories. 

Well, since it was posted in 2012, I'll just say it needs a little spit-and-shine. It'll be fixed in no time. :)
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NikoKarma Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yaya~ "okay I'll live with you" *glomps*
"Vee~ bella, want to take this upstairs?"
*blinks, blushes*
*cough!* "if you two would like I couls go-"
"Luddy don't leave yet!!!!!"
"Fel-"
"Uh....if he's staying what would we do upstairs feli?"
"Play monopoly~"
"That game splits up happily married people all over the world."
"But its-a fun!"
"How about we play mario cart?"
"Yay~"

(Most nations are pro gamers in my mind.)
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:iconmakazay:
Makazay Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
lol
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:iconnikokarma:
NikoKarma Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
~
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IketheCOOL Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014
*glances at title*

" GAY WITH ME?!" 
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..?
"Oh, stay with me." LOLOLOLOL
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:iconmakazay:
Makazay Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
lol
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BrokenCupcakes Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
'"Feliciano do you think Ludwig is actually is Holy Roman Empire?" Feliciano was in shocked. "I don't know but I don't want to asked either." you nodded knowing what he's saying.  "Oh, bella why don't you move here?" you were in shock "B-but I can't." Feliciano slipped a ring onto your finger. 

"Now you can." Feliciano smiled.'

Me: o.o whoa there gurly. I just met chu bae
Italy: Ve~ Bella, please?
Me: Fine bae, but how about we go to my country?
Italy: :D Ok, Bella!
*Italy and Me go to Narnia*
Italy: Whoa, Bella! This is where you live?
Me: Yep. XD
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:iconmakazay:
Makazay Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh goodness XD
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TheAwesoMelody Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol germany's just over there watching.
Cause why not you know?
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:iconmakazay:
Makazay Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I know right?
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EstrellaNina Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014
...And Germany's just awkwardly sitting in the background when Italy proposes...
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:iconmakazay:
Makazay Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
YES XD
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:iconcanadafan08:
CanadaFan08 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Student Photographer
*looks at ring* Well that escalated quickly, but Meh~ I'm not complaingItaly Icon :barrier for bishies: It works 
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:iconmakazay:
Makazay Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
XD yes yes it did
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:iconoshaco:
Oshaco Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014
:iconescalatedquicklyplz:^^
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:iconmakazay:
Makazay Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Well that escalated quickly
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:iconhetaliaxmeforever:
HetaliaXMEfOrever Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"Oh, bella why don't you move here?" you were in shock "B-but I can't." Feliciano slipped a ring onto your finger. 
"Now you can." Feliciano smiled. 
Me: -looks at ring then to Feli- Umm Feli no matter how happy I am but umm we like barely met so~ yeah 
Feliciano: -tears- Ve~ so that means you won't marry me?? 
Me: YOU CRAZY WHO COULD PASS MARRYING A HOT ITALIAN~~~!!!!!
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hetaliafangirl01 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ikr
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suisideScarlet Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
XD i read this out loud and my mom gave me a werid look 
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HetaliaXMEfOrever Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hahaha XD u really read it?! did she say anything other than giving u the weird look
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:iconmakazay:
Makazay Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD lol
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HetaliaXMEfOrever Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
XD ikr! If only this was real but it aint
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:iconmakazay:
Makazay Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I know TwT
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Sakura-Yotobari Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
He slipped the ring on me fingy "Now you can" he says with the cutest smile humanly possible.

Me: 0.0 what *looks at ring* *looks at Feli* *looks back at ring* *looks back at Feli*, well ok :3
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:iconmakazay:
Makazay Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lol otay xD
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hetaliabangtheoryfan Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013
Feliciano slipped a ring onto your finger. 
well that escalated quickly :iconthatescalatedplz:
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:iconmakazay:
Makazay Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
yes XD
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PACKWOMEN12 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Student
i soo was not expecting the ring! but i loved it!
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:iconmakazay:
Makazay Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lol no one was! xD
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:iconpackwomen12:
PACKWOMEN12 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Student
I guess thats what makes the author awsome! xD
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:iconmakazay:
Makazay Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes yes it does
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:iconpackwomen12:
PACKWOMEN12 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Student
YAY!
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gothicdoll222 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
A sudden marriage! Thats so cute~  :iconpervyitalyplz:  
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:iconmakazay:
Makazay Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I know
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MintTheKitty Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconmoarplz:
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:iconmakazay:
Makazay Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Maybe
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:icondeadeyeddemon:
DeadEyedDemon Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student General Artist
Woah felly! I just met you! This is crazy! But here's my number. So call me maybe?
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:iconmakazay:
Makazay Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
....XD totally!
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:icondeadeyeddemon:
DeadEyedDemon Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student General Artist
lulz. *my reaction to felly proposing* :iconohfuckplz:
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:iconmakazay:
Makazay Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD
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:icondeadeyeddemon:
DeadEyedDemon Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Student General Artist
oh god :iconohgodplz:
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:iconmakazay:
Makazay Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
WTF!
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:icondeadeyeddemon:
DeadEyedDemon Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Student General Artist
lol
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:iconmakazay:
Makazay Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
derp
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LunaMcChicken Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
ur writing storys about mi lil bro :3
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Makazay Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yup
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fnioami Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Student Artist
moeeee and did you mean ring?
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