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You were taking a trip to Italy for a vacation. The most beautiful place to you though you know many other places are like that. When you got from the plane a crowd of guys surrounded you telling you how pretty you are. You never got that at your home. You couldn't even get a date. So you took a trip to Italy to rest your mind for christmas before school started again. You walked down the paved room. All you heard was music and people being cheerful. You felt happy like you could do anything now. You got a hotel and headed out to see what Italy was like.

You went to a restaurant and when you were eating you saw a boy running. "AHHHHHHH!!!! IT'S ARTHUR!!! LUDWIG HELP!!!!" he hid under your table. You blushed and jolted a little from that. You looked under the table and saw him shaking. "Are you okay?" you asked wondering if he was okay. He saw you "Wow! Your prettier than the girls I've seen you must be an angel sent from heaven!" that made you blush tomato red. "I'm sorry for hiding." he smiled and got up. "I'm Feliciano Vargas! Though can call me Feliciano." He laughed. You smiled at that because you never had this much fun at (Where you live) ((unless you live in Italy XD)).

Feliciano took your hand and started to take you on a tour. "How do you know I'm new?" he laughed. "Because Bella, your accent is different." you looked at him. -My name is not Bella.- you thought. "Ummm, I'm ________ not Bella." you said. Feliciano looked at you "That means beautiful in Italy." he smiled. He took you to the Rome coliseum and you met his older brother Lovino. He wasn't that pleasant to met. He then took you to Venice and was rowing you down the strip in a gondola. Then he started to tell you a story about when he was young. "Hey, ________?" you looked at him, "Yes?" you answered. "Can I tell you a story?" you nodded and he started.

Feliciano took a deep breathe "When I was a little bambino. My Grandpa took care of me. Though I was interactive with other countries until he took me away. I learn many things from him he was a great teacher. Though when he left and return back home everyone was different. I guess we don't stay the same. This boy name Holy Rome try to become an alliance with me though I didn't because I didn't want him to become my grandpa. Now I wonder where he is now." he started to tear up.

You almost cried because of the story. You saw him tearing up. "Don't worry. He'll come back." Feliciano smiled. "Though he looks just like Ludwig." he laughed. You smiled and you got to a dock. "Hey would you like to come over for dinner at my place?" you blinked, "Sure." you answered blankly.

~~At his house~~

You walked to a cottage looking house and you looked at the address. -This is the address. Heh, his house is so cute.- you giggled. You walked up and knocked on the door. The door flung out and Feliciano was right there with a warm smile on his face. "Ciao~ I'm glad you came __________." he let you in. "Oh that's Ludwig." he pointed to the german that was drinking beer. He had slicked back blonde hair and blue eyes. He had a grim looked that scared you though he wore a green military clothes. You remember he said he looked just like him.

"Feliciano do you think Ludwig is actually is Holy Roman Empire?" Feliciano was in shocked. "I don't know but I don't want to asked either." you nodded knowing what he's saying.  "Oh, bella why don't you move here?" you were in shock "B-but I can't." Feliciano slipped a ring onto your finger.

"Now you can." Feliciano smiled.

You hugged him.
Sorry this was late
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Italy and Germany belong to :iconhimaruyaplz:
Pic belongs to :iconthayuu-chan:
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NOMNOMSUN Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014
Story seems rushed and has a lot of Grammar errors. Though, practice does make perfect, or if this is one of your earlier stories. 

Well, since it was posted in 2012, I'll just say it needs a little spit-and-shine. It'll be fixed in no time. :)
NikoKarma Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yaya~ "okay I'll live with you" *glomps*
"Vee~ bella, want to take this upstairs?"
*blinks, blushes*
*cough!* "if you two would like I couls go-"
"Luddy don't leave yet!!!!!"
"Uh....if he's staying what would we do upstairs feli?"
"Play monopoly~"
"That game splits up happily married people all over the world."
"But its-a fun!"
"How about we play mario cart?"

(Most nations are pro gamers in my mind.)
Makazay Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
NikoKarma Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
IketheCOOL Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014
*glances at title*

"Oh, stay with me." LOLOLOLOL
Makazay Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
BrokenCupcakes Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
'"Feliciano do you think Ludwig is actually is Holy Roman Empire?" Feliciano was in shocked. "I don't know but I don't want to asked either." you nodded knowing what he's saying.  "Oh, bella why don't you move here?" you were in shock "B-but I can't." Feliciano slipped a ring onto your finger. 

"Now you can." Feliciano smiled.'

Me: o.o whoa there gurly. I just met chu bae
Italy: Ve~ Bella, please?
Me: Fine bae, but how about we go to my country?
Italy: :D Ok, Bella!
*Italy and Me go to Narnia*
Italy: Whoa, Bella! This is where you live?
Me: Yep. XD
Makazay Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh goodness XD
TheAwesoMelody Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol germany's just over there watching.
Cause why not you know?
Makazay Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I know right?
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